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Your smile exudes a warmth that melts my heart...
just like the pallid dream I had once envisioned.
Even if the present were to be cleaved by the setting sun...
our shadows will continue to overlap one another.
Ever so distant, ever so deeply...
our fates intertwined
So many times have I help on and lost.
Now finally we can meet one another.
Just like how the sky yearns for the land, and how the flowers wait for rainfall,
the night is always in love with tomorrow.
Our hearts used to be united as one.
We yearned for each other so much.
When one or two petals on the white rose scatter...
our love will be everlasting.
I just... made this... I don't have much to say about it. Hope you like it.
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know I had a lot of my personality in those pieces of written work too... I feel bad I can't find most of them :( It's like losing a piece of myself.
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Foxesareawesome Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
That just sucks
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'll find it though... it has to be somewhere. I didn't get rid of it.
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Foxesareawesome Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
Well that's good
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You should definitely keep this one for your personal works/archives. Then when you meet the guy you love (or even if you're already with him "meet" would then be defined as the next time you spend time together), or when you have children, or grandchildren, or nieces and nephews, you can show them all what you have created... and be proud of it!

I'm trying to build that collection myself. I have at least 30-40 pieces already within the past 2.5 years, but most are in a binder I can't find anymore! :(
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Foxesareawesome Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
Awww... that sucks...
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love your metaphors and similes in this piece of writing!

Great visualization of different elements of yours and that special person's love!... especially the flowers, the sunset and shadows, and the dream.

Good job Fox! Whoever that person is you love would be proud to read something like that!
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Foxesareawesome Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
Thank you ^_^ I'm very proud of this. ^_^
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